PQP Memo

I like how the author shows how strictly the characters have to behave and how every move they make has to show their rivals that they are strong. For example, when Enq was walking he tried to hide his limp as much as possible to show that he is strong and that Yesugei’s arrow had not affected him too much. I like this because it makes the characters in the story become more realistic and human.
I would like to see some more information about Temujin’s father, Yesugei. He seems like a dark and mysterious person, that I would like to see some more background information about and how he became the character that he is. I would also like some clarification on how marrying the sons of one tribe to the daughters of another tribe would benefit both of them. What is the good of giving away people to another tribe that could one day attack you? I would like to ask why you decided to make Temujin such a lighthearted child, even though he becomes one of the most feared warriors later on in his life?
I suggest that you add more background information about Temujin’s father, Yesugei. I think this will make the story better because Temujin has a strong connection with his father and his father feels the same way even if he doesn’t show it. Showing a bit of information on where his father comes from and how he became the person he is might give the reader a better understanding of why Temujin was raised that way, and thus better showing how Temujin became who he is.